We give it 6/10 because it needed onomatopoeias and conjunctions because we were bored a little bit.We liked it at the start because how the backround was.Brenna Cameron charlotte Ben
We liked the part when the mouse tricked the gruffalo . We din,t like when it showed what the gruffalo looked like. from group jess t Bianca Anna s Mitchell
I like the start of the book because it's funny when everyone gets scared of the mouse, I give it 8/10from melissa,jess h youussef.
ReplyDeleteIt was funny because the mouse was scared of the grufflo. 10/10.
ReplyDeletefrom logan rozena,hayden and Tessa.
We give it 6/10 because it needed onomatopoeias and conjunctions because we were bored a little bit.We liked it at the start because how the backround was.Brenna Cameron charlotte Ben
ReplyDeleteWe liked the part when the mouse tricked the gruffalo .
ReplyDeleteWe din,t like when it showed what the gruffalo looked like.
from group jess t Bianca Anna s Mitchell